Please review the elements of a short story of the fairy tale or story you wrote about in class today. First, provide a summary of the story you and your partner chose. Then, explain which part of the plot you think is the most important and why.
Make sure that you use proper spelling and grammar. I have noticed that not everyone is using correct capitalization. Always capitalize the first letter of every sentence, proper nouns such as names, titles, and the pronoun "I."
Remember, it is a good idea to write your response in Microsoft Word and then Copy/Paste into the blog.
With my partner ,We chose the fairy tale “Little Red Riding Hood”.
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Once upon time, in a small town there was a girl who was named “Little red riding hood” by people because she was always wearing a red hood. One day, her mother gave a basket (which contains foods) to her and she needed to give it to her grandmother who lived far way. A grey wolf heard that the little red riding hood was going to the grandmother’s house and he had planned to eat the girl. On the road, the little red riding hood met a old man who told her that her grandma was very sick and needed someone to look after her .When she arrived to the house, she heard the grandmother was coughing very badly without noticing the grandmother was already eaten by the grey wolf. As she got close to the grandmother, the grey wolf opened his mouth and ate the girl. The girl cried out and alarmed the hunter next door. When the hunter came, he rescued the girl and her grandmother by cutting the wolf’s stomach then they put many stones to the wolf’s belly.
I think the most important part of the plot is rising action because a good rising action could catch more readers.
Once upon time a carpenter called Geppeto built a wooden puppet, and named him Pinocchio.
ReplyDelete“How nice it would be if it were a real boy!” sighed when he finished the paint. That night a good fairy grants his wish. Only if he will prove brave, courageous ans selfless he one day will be a child.
Geppetto was happy to see that his little man of wood could move and talk! That morning sent him to school. Pinocchio naughty, he went to Eaters, a puppeteer who promised to make him famous.
After the show finished, the blue fairy appeared asking him why i didn’t go to school. Pinocchio answered with a lie and his nose began to grow.. Only when he told the truth, the fairy delivered him and his nose returned to normal. Returning home, Pinocchio saw a coach load of young revelers. The coachman said that he was directed to Toyland, where children could do whatever they wanted. He went with him, but then discovered that lazy and rude kids were turned into donkeys.
So Pinocchio ran in despair, followed his faithful friend Cricket and together returned home to Geppetto, but thet found none. At that moment, a dove brought them a message: Geppetto was swallowed by a whale and was now his prisoner.So Pinocchio was determined to save him.. He arrived at the sea, dived to the bottom and found the father in the belly of the whale. But how to get out of there? Then lit a fire: the smoke had sneezing whale, who opened his mouth. Pinocchio and Geppetto escaped on a raft. The puppet helped his father to swim among the other waves came ashore, however, for the great effort fainted. Sorry, Geppetto took him home. But the Fairy, as promised, rewarded his courage and his goodness, transforming it into a real boy!
I don't think that there is a most important part of the plot, every part of the plot has something important and that's why people try to remember all.
But I think that the most interesting or significant part of the fairy tale is when Pinocchio understood how much important was Geppetto, and was with this intention that he could save his father from the belly of the whale and became a real child.
Me and my partner chose “Snow White”
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Once upon a time there was a nice beauty called Snow White. She worked as a made or slave in the house. She had three step sisters and a step mother. All of them hated Snow White. One day she decided to go away. She meets a witch who offers her a red apple. She eats it and becomes horrible. With the help of the seven dwarfs and of the mice, she goes to a ball where she meets a beautiful prince and when the kiss each other she becomes nice as before. They marry and they live happily ever after.
I think the most important part of the plot was when Snow White eats the red apple because it is there that the story begins and I am sure that it is also the most and entertaining part.
SNOW WHITE AND THE SEVEN DWARVES
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Snow White and the seven dwarves is a fairy that talks about a girl that is the most “beautiful of all” so the evil witch wants to kill her to become the most beautiful of all so when Snow White escapes she meets seven dwarves: Doc, Grumpy, Happy, Sleepy, Bashful, Sneezy, and Dopey, she will live in their cottage. Eventually the Queen discovers that Snow White is still alive so she gave her a poisoned apple. Aa Prince who had previously met and fallen in love with Snow White, captivated by her beauty, he kisses her, which breaks the spell and awakens her. They will ride to the queens castle to kill her. The story ends that they mary “and live happily ever after”.
I think the most important part of the plot is when the Prince kisses snow white to break the spell, because it is the thing most important, it is the thing that you first remember about if you think about the “Snow White and the Seven Dwarves”.
BY:NICOLO’ FERRARI
As previous I stated that the most important part of a plot is the rising action. A rising action is a bridge that leads to the climax or the turning point and usually during the climax important events happen, so as we are reading the rising action it slowly tells us what is going to happen so when we get to the climax we would not get confuse. However, all the parts of a plot are important, it’s like a chain which connecting all the ideas. In the fairy tale “Little Red Riding Hood” the rising action is when the grey wolf was planning to eat the girl. It’s important because it implied what was going to happen.
ReplyDeleteI and with my partner ,We chose snow white and the seven dwarfs
ReplyDeletea jealous queen attempts to get rid of her beautiful step-daughter, Snow White, However, the Huntsman cannot commit the horrible deed, so she flees and finds refuge in the home of seven diamond-mine dwarfs. Doc ,Happy ,Bashful ,Sneezy ,Sleepy ,Grumpy and Dopey When the Queen discovers that Snow White is still alive, she transforms herself into an old hag and brings a poisonous apple to the young girl. A kiss from Prince Charming rouses Snow White from her deep slumber.
I think the snow white eat poisonous apple that part is important because if she didn’t eat that apple and wouldn’t meet the prince and also the queen jealous snow white is also very important because that is cause.
My partner and i chose little Red ridinghood..
ReplyDeleteThis is a story about a little girl who is sent to her grandmother's house to go see her because the grandmother was very ill,so along the way little red riding hood met a big wolf that aske her where she was going,and the little girl told the wolf she was going to see her grandmother who was very ill,so the wolf told the girl about a shorter way to go to her grandmothers house,but it was actually the longer way,and the wolf took the short cut so he could get to grandmother's house first so he can eat the cakes that little Red riding hood had for her gran..When little red rif=ding hood got to grandma's house the wolf was dressed up as the grandmother and was sleeping in grandma's bed,but the little girl noticed that it was the wolf and not grandma,grandma was feeling better and she went to pick herself some beautiful flowers when the wolf came..little red ridinghood tried to run away she was screaming for help then a wood chopper heard her screaming and he came to chase the wolf away.
I think the most important part of the plot is the begining of the story because it tells us that along the way she met a big wolf..and just by knowing that she met a wolf it makes you curious on how the story will end,and what happens to the girl and the wolf
I and my partner chose "Little Red Riding Hood"
ReplyDeleteLittle Red Riding Hood is a story that tells about a little girl that goes to her grandmother's house to bring her cookies and goods.
On the way the girl meets the wolf that asks her where she is going and she told him that she was going to visit her grandmother.The wolf tells the girl to take a shorter way that he knows but it really is not because he wants to go and eat the grandma before the girl gets to the house.The girl does not listen to the wolf's advice but the wolf is still getting to the house first and gets in the dress of the grandma,who he closes in the wardrobe.When the girl gets to the house,she realizes that there is the wolf in the bed so she calls a hunter that chases the wolf away.
I think that the most important part of the story is when Little Red Riding Hood meets the wolf,it is the turning point of the story,if she hadn't met the wolf the story would have not continued.