Remember, we do not have school on Monday. That means Tuesday will be Day 4 and we will be meeting.
For your homework this weekend, finish the following story in any way in at least 300 words. Think about what might have happened to make the narrator's day go so wrong! Think about what else might have happened to the speaker.
The other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when...
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Hello Ms Gelso,
ReplyDeleteThis is the rest of the paragraph you wrote, I decided it would be part of a dairy of a spoiled girl! I have to spilt them in two parts because it wont accept more then 4,096 characters! Here it is:
PART 1
Dear Diary,
« The other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when... »
I went in the kitchen and saw my brother using my Lussorian hair straightener! I mean that is the most expensive straightener on earth and my brother uses it on his curly greasy hair, EW! To make it worse when I opened the fridge, I discovered that my mom had replaced my diet milk with normal milk! I do NOT want to be fat like her! She is 50 kg… so fat! When I finished my fattening breakfast of non-diet milk and tofu, I went upstairs to my dressing room. I love my dressing room; it’s the best part of the whole house! I just love the smell of new clothes! When I went to my fifth skirt closet, I realized that my Prada skirt was still in the dryer! I also realized that my skirts of a month ago were so not fashion anymore! So I ended up wearing a pair of Fendi pants, a Gucci buttoned shirt, and a pair of red Valentino heels. I tied my hair in a bun and put on my most luxurious skunk fur coat. To finish off, I sprayed on a Channel Number 5 bottle. There, I was divine!
Then I went downstairs and waited in the lobby. I asked one of my mom’s maids if my personal driver had arrived. Do you know what she responded? That he was sick… How horrible is that! “I don’t care if he is sick or not, I do not want to take the bus!” But I had no choice. A few minutes later I found myself in the school bus that stank like peanut butter and jelly sandwiches and cheap perfume.
I didn’t have time to put makeup on so I had to put it in the bus. I sat in the front seats and stuck my mirror on the window, thanks to the suckers behind it. I installed myself in front of it and smudged on my lips a thick coat of red Yves Saint Laurent lipstick. When I started on the eyeliner, the bus suddenly stopped and caused me to draw a zigzag all over my cheek, starting from my eye to my nose. I swore out loud and some rude kids started laughing at me calling me a “witch face”. I took out my make-up remover and erased the zigzag off my cheek. When I finally finished putting my makeup, we arrived at school.
I got off the bus and went into the locker hall. Great, none of my “best gal pals” were here yet. Then I noticed that Greg (the cutest guy in school) was hanging out with his friends. I went up to them to say hi. When they turned towards me, their face was puzzled and all they did was blink at me. I thought that I had stunned them with my beauty, causing them to remain speechless, so I flashed them a wide smile.
PART 2
ReplyDeleteI walked to my locker and opened it. I fixed some glittery pictures and ribbons on it’s side and looked at myself in the mirror… Oh, Horror… I still had a faint line of eyeliner across my cheek! I slightly opened my mouth and noticed a slight color of red on a tooth. I opened my mouth wider and noticed that my two front teeth were covered with red lipstick! Oh, marvelous... I turned around to notice that Greg and his friends were still looking at me, blinking. “Great” I muttered. I wiped off the red lipstick from my teeth and cleaned off the rest of the eyeliner.
Everything after went fine… until lunchtime. I went to serve myself at the cafeteria buffet and took three leaves of salad, a drop of vinegar, NO OIL, two tomato slices, and a ball of mozzarella. For desert, I had a slice of apple and pineapple. I walked towards the popular table, and a silly girl accidentally bumped into me and a piece of tomato from her salad flew on my coat. Then some children thought it was funny to fling other small vegetables at my coat. I, of course, didn’t notice... until I passed near Greg. He went up to me and asked me, what I thought then, was the sweetest question: “Lucretia, why are you dressed so originally today?” I told him that I was trying to work on a fabulous look. He answered: “Well your coat is covered with food, was that part of your look?” I looked at him wide eyed and immediately took off my coat. I threw it on him and inspected it. On my coat there were, exactly, three olives, two tomatoes, an oil stain, a piece of chicken leg, a piece of cake and a “kick me” sign. I could not stand this anymore… I screamed at the top of my lungs and visibly, I scared Greg, because he ran away with my dirty coat over his head. I screamed some more and stormed out to the hallway. I randomly pulled some papers off the walls and pushed some people on the way.
When I was finally outside, I dialed my mom’s number and asked her if she could pick me up. I didn’t care if the school day wasn’t over, I couldn’t take another minute of it! Then my mum made some lame excuse saying that she couldn’t get me. I threw a fit. I decided that I had to get home anyways so I decided to go by foot. While I was walking home, it started raining. I slipped in mud, ripped the back of my pants, my mascara dripped down my cheeks and my hair was a mess. Now I am in my king sized bed, with a chamomile, writing this. What a terrible day!
Lucretia
I hope you enjoyed it!
Have a good weekend!
Paloma,
ReplyDeleteWonderful work! You really characterized Lucretia well. Her actions, thoughts, and conversations with characters truly show how spoiled she is. It was also very fun to read! You also did a good job of writing using informal language--perfect for a diary.
Great job, have a good weekend!
Ms Gelso, this is the end of the story. I decided to be a person who suffers a lot by his cousin and he writes a letter to his best friend for his summer vacations.
ReplyDeleteDear John,
“The other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when...”
…I remembered that today is the first day of the summer vacations (telling this I should be very happy but…).My parents had the terrible idea to visit my horrible cousin for 2 MONTHS! And I have to be with them. It is the first time that I hope there are not holidays (I know, I shocked with myself, too)! Jane (my cousin) always bothers me because I am the youngest. She always finds a way to deride and laugh at me.
Last time I visited her, she invited me to go out with her and her company. I thought at the beginning that she changed her mind and was good, so I accepted. But it was one of her jokes and she humiliated me in front of all her friends. While I was going to sit on a chair she pushed it and I fell to the ground where she had put a thumbtack. You can imagine what followed. I screamed and at a time, everyone was staring at me. After that, I found an excuse and I got home.
The same night, I was hearing voices, so I woke up and went to the kitchen to drink some water. There Jane was waiting me because she knows that I am afraid of the dark and she scared me by wearing a white sheet pretending the ghost. But she didn’t notice that she forgot to wear slippers so I dropped the water to her feet and she started screaming. I was so glad but with a quick movement she put off the sheet, then she put it on me and when everyone came she said that I was trying to scare her and to defend herself, she dropped water on MY feet and then I screamed like a little girl. I was so mad but I couldn’t do anything.
These are the reasons why I don’t want to visit her! John, help me! Oh, and by the way, I told my parents to come with us, so we’ll be together. And don’t worry for Jane…she is very good…deep inside!
See you soon,
Stavros
Thankyou! Im glad you enjoyed it! It actually gave me an inspiration to write more diares of Lucretia!
ReplyDeleteDear Diary,
ReplyDelete"The other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when…"
I went down stairs to do breakfast but I saw that in the fridge that there was only little milk , so I decided to buy breakfast myself . I went upstairs to dress myself, so I opened my closet and found out that my favorite pants had holes, so great!!, I couldn't ware them. So than I finally weared my best Prada pant, it is a really precious pant, it is a dark blue with a lot of stress, it is really adorable and my fabulous Brandy and Melville shirt, it is pink with a white writing, I looked really fabulous!!.
After I dressed up I went to buy breakfast, I was really starving, the weather was really hot, after a long walk finally saw a very large store, but unfortunately everything was finished so I couldn't eat anything. When I got to school in the stinky bus, I was already late to class and my teacher was very upset and angry with me she had to give me a warning and next time that happened I had one hour of detention with her. At lunch time I finally got a delicious hot dog with a lot of ketchup and while I was walking to the popular table a boy passed with his tray and spilled it on my brand new shirt, it was a disaster because everyone was laughing at me.
Since I had enough of this terrible day and I immediately called my mother to pick me up from school but she said she was busy and had a very important and urgent meeting. So I needed to wait until school finished but since I didn't want to wait anymore I decided to go by foot, when I was almost home it started raining and there was a terrible storm so I slipped on ground, I fell on the puddles and my pants broke, my hair was all muddy, it was a disaster!!. Now I am in my beautiful room writing in my diary what terrible day I had!!.
Lucy
I hope you enjoyed it!!!
Have a good weekend!!!
Stavros--
ReplyDeleteI like that you decided to write a letter. It is a different format than a diary, but can still be very personal and use informal language, staying true to the nature of the prompt. What an interesting twist for John at the end, too!
A couple of tips: "Company" usually refers to a business or entertaining guests (ex. We are having company over to the house for dinner tonight.). In the case of your letter, "friends" would be an appropriate replacement. Lastly, you sentence at the end ("I told my parents to come with us, so we’ll be together") is missing a pronoun. I would rewrite it as: I told my parents that you should come with us, so we'll be together.
All in all, fantastic!
Ludovica,
ReplyDeleteYour diary entry is complete and you have finished the story. You also used adjectives well throughout--"adorable," "delicious," "terrible")--all very specific words!
Next steps: Start focusing on how you use prepositions. Some of them are used incorrectly. Examples: "with white writing" not "with a white writing" and "in a puddle" not "in the puddles." Also, many of your sentences are run-on sentences. Make sure that each sentence is one complete thought with a subject and a predicate. If you have many subjects and predicates linked together with a comma, that is too many! Break those types of sentences down.
EVERYONE: I am excited to see CREATIVITY! Think of how many DIFFERENT ways you can finish the prompt!!!
ReplyDeleteThe other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing, but the floor was still wet and muddy from the last rain fall. But everything changed when I was going to school, I fell into mud and into a man hole leading to the sewage, I manage to come out and I wiped some mud from my clothes and continued my journey to school. I had a cold and couldn’t perceive any smell. Then the worst happened, I stepped on a piece of animal dung without realizing it , When I got to school and past the front door, everyone look at me as if they had never seen me before with a terrible expression on their faces. Oh! What a nightmare. It was when I got to class, that everyone looked at me and then started to hold their noses as I came in, I left some dung by the door and then from the mirror placed on the wall in the class, I saw myself with part of my clothes full of mud. All of a sudden I started perceiving animal dung, my cold had disappeared, I could then smell everything, the smell came from me and I could see how bad I looked. I now understood why everyone was staring at me with their hands over their noses. After that, I ran home so fast that I tripped and hurt my self. When I got home, I had a bleeding kneel and was taken to the hospital. What a day, I wish I had never had a day like this and hope no one has a day like this, what a NIGHTMARE COME TURE.
ReplyDeleteHOPE YOU LIKED IT.
Dear Diary,
ReplyDeleteThe other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when I founded out I have no cereals left. I knew it was 7:32 and school started in about one hour, so I had to go to a really close minimarket and get some cereals. I just dressed up randomly, in some of dad's formal clothes... I got there at the minimarket, I bought some Nesquik but suddenly, we had an energy problem! All the lights turned off, the cash machines didn't work anymore, it was a huge mess. It got fixed in about 5 minutes, and they I ran straight to home as fast as I could. I had my delicious breakfast really fast, and then I jumped into the bus, I was on time it was 8:01. BUT then the bus stopped! The driver got a bug in his eye and he stopped the bus! After 6 seconds I herd a BOOM!!! A car crashed in our back. After I freaked out, I remembered that first period I have French, where I was supposed to have a test!! The GOOD part was that all the kids in the bus were in my French class, but the BAD part was that we couldn't make it to school on time. It was 8:19 and we were something like 3 KM away. So what did we do? We jumped off the bus and we started running to school faster than Bolt! We finally arrived at school. It was 8:27 and the class was about to start. Everyone except me went straight to class but not me, I had to get my notebook and binder from my locker. I went to my locker, but.. I COULDN'T REMEMBER MY COMBINATION!!! So I went down to Mr. Adam's Office and asked for the combination fast. He said okay, chill out it's gonna take me less than 1 minute. So I got the combination I opened my locker, and then I went straight to class. I was on the right floor, next to the classroom but I hear.. RING RING RING!! The bell has rang!! I was late. I tried to explain Ms. Borum the situation but no. I got detention today during lunchtime. It was just terrible... I had to re-write the 500 rules of the school again! It took me all the lunchtime and I couldn't even eat! So it was 2:35... time to go home... but still had to do lots of homework. Since the bus was crashed, I had to walk alone home because both mom and dad were busy. So I started to walk home... I got really hungry after I walked 2 KM so I stopped at a Pizza Hut and got a really good pizza. I forgot that I have no money with me, so I had to pay with my credit card which had 1,50 Euro on it, and the pizza was 1,51. So I had to find 1 Cent... and I found one on the ground at the very entrance of Pizza Hut. After I payed I realized I didn't find 1 Cent, I founded 2 Euros. I got rick rolled... So I went back on my road. 10 minutes later the rain started. I had to sit next to a drunk man so that I don't get sweat. I called my mom immanently to pick me up no matter what she is busy with. She came 3 hours later because there was traffic. What a horrible day... and tomorrow I get my test back from French.
Hope You Enjoyed Ms. Gelso!
The other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when...
ReplyDeleteI began to hear a strange sound of a strange animal. There were 3 tigers outside my door waiting for me, singing a strange song that would say: “Hello baby, how are you. I hope well since I want to eat you!!!” I didn’t know what to do so I decided to call my mather, that unfortunately wasn’t in the house, so I went to reach the phone and there was a strange spider with 10 leges. On each leg there was a number, but unfortunatelly, the spider was alive and when he would see me, he would run away, so I needed to invent somethig else. Since I was closed in a little room, with a little window, the only thing I could do was to jump from the fourth flour. Fortunatelly outside the window there was a thick and long rope, so I decided to use it. But, as I touched it, a little message come out from the rope. On it there was written that to use the rope and pass the big cannal that divided my room from ALL the “world”, I needed to do the gorilla sound during the flight, ore then I would have returned back to my room. I had 3 chances. If at the third jump I wouldn’t yell very loudly, some thorns would came out of the rope, make me leave it, and make me fall. Unfortunatelly, arrived at the last chance I didn’t yell enough and I fell in The cannal. I was so scarred to fall, when suddently an unicorn, with a sky-blue corn, catched me and brought me to the other part: The World!!
This was a very weird animal. I could talk with him, as if he was my best friend, someone that I needed really a lot in that terrible moment in which I couldn’t find my family and friends.As I arrived on the other part of the enormeous cannal, Bob, the unicorn’s name, made me has a tour guy and finnally helped me find all I needed... But suddently the ground started to shake, a big earthwake arrived and suddently I "woke up" and found my self in many little but beautiful room. I immediately went to open the door to check, and there was my mother bringing me my breakfeast... So that was only a terrible and strange dream thjat I will never forget...
When I looked out of the window of my colored room I saw cats and dogs runnig and distroying the city.
ReplyDeleteBeing a lover of animals I didn't know how to help this situation. What I first thought was to go and tell my mother and fother or sisters and tell them what had happened but I remembered that, today all my family was going on a camping and left me home alone.
I was terrorized because I saw that a huge Alano (big dog, that sometimes is agressive)was trying to open my door. What I first thougt was to open and give him food, but I felt attracted from the idea that, he could hurt my other dog, Otto.
I had many Ideas to help those poor animals that were hungry and thirsty. After many hesitacions I chose to do a hotel for dogs and cats!!
I started building it with the help of a car that was in the garage made on purpose to move heavy objects after few hours I build up an hotel for dogs I decided to call it the " BOU & MIAO HOTEL".
When I opened the door of the hotel I started whistling and throuwing bones in the sky.
After few minutes I saw that more than 400 dogs and 325 cats were arriving in my coasy hotel.
Inside it was an hospital were I could cure them and help them.
Later on I noticed that almost all the animals were sick and hurt.
What could I, as a student that didn't know anything about medicine do to those poor animals ???
I thought over and over when I finally came up with a wonderful idea , I remembered that in my room I had seen the day before on animal planet a documentary on how to cure animals.
I entered the hospital and saw that all the dogs and cats had wings!!! I couldn't believe at my eyes...
When night came I went to my room to sleep but The animals were making too much noise so I didn't understand what was going on ,so I opened my eyes and went in the hotel and saw that all the animals were flying. I didn't know what to do so I opened the door and almost all started to fly on the moon when everyone was gone I noticed that DOD ( a dog I particulary liked )before flying away, he started talking to me, and said " hold me little child " I hold on to him and he brought me high in the sky until we arrievd to a land of treasures and beauty. I could only say WOW.
I heard a huge noise, So I opened my eyes and saw my room, only I realized it was a dream.
The other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when...
ReplyDeleteMs. Gelso this is the end of the story. I decided to be a bully that likes to bother poor little Lucia and sudenly karma strikes him....
Dear diary,
My name is Denis, and I didn't know that a book with blank page to write about his feelings even existed. Anyways today I realized Lucia’s life would be easier if I stopped bothering her so much. What happened today made me open my eyes and see the world in another perspective.
The worst day of my life started with my usual prank towards my sister Lucia, I wet her bed with some water from the toilette, took pictures of her, upload them to YouTube, and told mom and dad so she would have started her day embarrassed. she didn't took more than a few seconds to realized it was my genius mind behind all these, so she said "karma, karma" and I thought she was going nuts so I ignored her.
After that relaxing prank I took a shower like every morning but this time the only thing that would come out was cold water, so I closed my eyes and got in suddenly the water stopped and after a "SQUSH" wastes started falling on me as soon as I reacted I was covered in a brown substance that smelled. When I got out of the shower, and told mom I had a little problem, then she said “ what is it sweetie?” I answered “ it isn’t a really big thing ,just that I’m covered with…. WASTES!!!” mom said “WHAT?!?!??” ,my answer was very clear “yes the shower is broken because at beginning just cold water will come out and after a minute poop started covering my body”.
To get my mother to understand I passed thirty five minutes writing and explaining and showing the smelly substance that was covering me, she told me to take a long shower with lots of shampoo and six kilograms of soap in her bathroom. When I was done I was still smelling indecently, but at least I was clean to go to school.
While being at school things were weird everybody would look at me, try not to breath and when I wasn’t looking they would laugh, but I didn’t know why until I enter to class and the teacher (Ms. Rolerapple) said “is it true what facebook comment that says you were covered with poop” then I realized what was happening so I sighed and answered “yesss”. During the day the laughs and the making fun of me stopped a little bit but the name calling didn’t, poopanator or smelly Denis etc.
During lunch it got worse because while I was in the row for lunch my fork fell off my plate and obviously I picked it up and when a reached it I heard a “CRASH” followed by some laughs so I turned what had happened so I could also laugh a little bit, but when I turned around everybody was taking pictures at me and laughing while pointing me, so I realized my pants had just ripped, and besides that, the person behind me was Jeannette or the girl I like so I gave up and hided in the bathroom and skipped classes until schooled finished.
To finish the day with the cherry on top of the cake, my mom couldn’t pick me up o I had to walk twenty blocks home with my little sister laughing and saying “told you, Karma bam!!!” and in the middle of the long walk home… < it began to rain cats and dogs! >
Hi
ReplyDeleteI’m actually basing this on a combination of the worst days I had last year.
The other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when...
I found out that I was a late for school. So I quickly got out of bed and went to the bathroom to have a shower, then I found out that we also didn’t have any hot water! So I quickly had a cold shower which made me sleepier than I was, and got some clothes on. When I went to go have breakfast we were out of milk so I had to have tea and I hate tea! After I got out of the house I was not late for the bus anymore because I got ready quick enough which was good and I was happy until I found out that the bus came early. I had to sit in the very front seat next to the driver where I had barely any space to put my backpack and my legs in front of me. On the hole bus ride my brother and his friend where bugging me and flicking me in the back of the head when I was trying to play on my iPod.
When we got to school all my friends weren’t here like always so I went to my first period class which was Italian. After Italian I went straight to my second class because my toe was still sore form almost breaking it/ breaking it a moth ago. After my second class which was social studies, I had lots of homework to do for the next two days because yesterday I got 2 projects to do for science and art. For the rest of the day I didn’t get that much homework but I sat down a lot because of my toe. At the end of the day it was raining hard so I ran to my house but when I got there I found out that my mom wasn’t home! So I and to wait outside for 30 minutes in the cold rain while I was waiting for my mom came back. Right now I’m writing this down for English homework that was overdue today and I’m thinking what am I gong to do with a of this other homework I have to do.
Bye Christian
:)
Uchenna--
ReplyDeleteGood work! Sounds like your character really had an awful day.
Tip: In English, "to perceive" something usually refers to how you think about something or even how you see something, but does not usually refer to smell. Using the verb "to smell" works just fine!
Mihnea--
Great job on using informal and yet exciting language such as "BOOM," "freaked out," "chill out," and "rick rolled."
You had a couple of errors with your verb tenses. Make sure you stay consistent. Example: You wrote "I was on the right floor, next to the classroom but I hear.. RING RING RING!! The bell has rang!!" instead of "I was on the right floor, next to the classroom, but then I heard.. RING RING RING!! The bell rang!!"
Dafne--
ReplyDeleteYour story was surprising and exciting. It was very creative, too! At first I was not sure what was happening, but found out at the end that it was all a dream.
TIP: "THAT" refers to an object. "WHO" refers to a person. You wrote: "I didn’t know what to do so I decided to call my mather, that unfortunately wasn’t in the house" Unless, your mother is a THING you must use "WHO." Change this sentence to "I didn't know what to do so I decided to call my mother, who unfortunately wasn't in the house." For more information, check http://www.grammarbook.com/grammar/whoVwhVt.asp
Sofia,
ReplyDeleteYour story is definitely a creative twist on the idiom "it's raining cats and dogs." Are you familar with what this normally means? Were you just taking creative liberties?
Tomas--
ReplyDeleteVery creative to end the story that way. I like that the mean bully Denis got some payback! Your story showed cause and effect in its plot--he really seemed to have learned his lesson.
TIP: You wrote: "she didn't took more than a few seconds to realized it was my genius mind behind all these." Sometimes your past and perfect tense verbs are incorrect, particular those that are irregular. Study up! This sentence should be written like this: "she didn't take more than a few seconds to realize it was my genius mind behind all these"
Christian,
ReplyDeleteMany of the best writers base their stories off of things that have happened to them in their own lives--let's hope this isn't true in Tomas' case though! You described many events that all added up to a terrible day and thus fulfilled the requirements of the prompt.
HINT for next time: You wrote: "On the hole bus ride my brother and his friend where bugging me and flicking me in the back of the head when I was trying to play on my iPod." It's very easy to mix up words that sound or look the same. Remember, A "HOLE" is an empty space dug in the ground. You meant to write "WHOLE" meaning "entire." Also, "WHERE" refers to a place. You meant to write "WERE."
This is the dairy of a boy from the year 3020
ReplyDeleteDear Malic,
The other day I was walking home from school when suddenly it began to rain cats and dogs! What a terrible end to a terrible day! When I woke up this morning, the sun was shining and the birds were singing. But everything changed when the flying car passed through it nearly tripped me luckily my shield protected me actionated right in time. Later on the rain stopped but I was socked because I forgot my 3990 watch which included various features for example: time, umbrella, virtual chat, a radar to see were mom is… This isn’t all I also met the lovely lion frank has I used the shield but then it ran out of batteries. When I arrived to school I found Mr. Francesco in class he was really angry and I had forgotten to do my homework so when he checked it he saw I didn’t do it and let it slip but after someone paranked call me and I had forgotten to put my telephone away and to turn it off my ring tone was ringing in the middle of his speech he was really angry but he told next thing I call your parents and u mister go to the principle. Then u can imagine what happened I had forgotten my book so he sent me to the principal’s office. Then my mom and dad punished me. Like that wasn’t enough. When I was coming back home I saw an enormous rat which scared me and made me run away and bump into Blade that’s what they call him at least, he’s the biggest bully around. He looked at me and grinned a smile I was scared he punched me and made me arrive home with a black eye My mom was so mad that she didn’t even notice and now I am right here talking to u about it.